After listening to my dry run video my group gave me some good tips and feedback for my final draft. First they said I had to many filler words and to help me fix that I should read and say my speech multiple times so I am more fluid in what I want to say. Another member also said to use my visual in a more meaningful way. I just sort of flashed it in because I was unsure of how to incorporate it into my speech. After hearing his idea I have a much greater grasp of how to flow my visuals smoothly into my speech. As for advice feedback I gave to my peers, for one person I told them to find a different place to record because there was a glare over their face. For another person I mentioned that it was great that their speech was so open about themselves and how they have improved their academic life. I thought what this person talked about was very personal and intriguing and could connect to the audience, but it didn’t exactly answer the prompt question. I told that person to focus more on what you’ll continue to do to become a better student and not just telling students what not to do.
